Tashai's online writing portifilo

Self Reflective

tashaiisawriter — Wed, 27 May 2009 14:38:47 +0000

In this Creative Writing class I have learned alot. A few things I learned is that I have improved in my writing and I have improved in my vocabulary. I think that writing is a nice way to relax, and there is nothing wrong with writing everyday. A few more things I learned in this class is that writing is another part of life. You can take it to different levels and start off with different concepts. I also like how my intelligence has moved up onto different levels and stuff. The biggest part about my wrting has been the ideas. I also learned that I can come up with many ideas starting off the basic ideas. When ever I began to write creativity writings I will think about this class and how I am learning to be a better writer. No matter what I will always use the things that I learned in this class to improve my writing because it’s only a matter of ideas that’ll take you a long way in life and I won’t let any negativity get in my way because I need every idea to improve and I need all kinds of feedback to help me with all my work. Writing is a good idea and it’s actually something I enjoy because it helps me face all the good and bad that’ll come and go in life. I like the way I write and I like everyone way of helping me through feedback. One thing I learned in this class is that feedback and peer editing can take you a long way. Nothing in life is better than the help from others.

I enjoyed this class I have taken called Creative Writing and I would enjoy sharing how far it brought me in the long run because the class has extended alot in me including my writing and vocabulary because all this is very essential.

Thinking Through Feedback

tashaiisawriter — Wed, 27 May 2009 14:10:20 +0000

My Peers & I Feedback

The feedback I recieved from my peers was helpful. When I looked back over my work I later realized the comment my peers said were true. Another thing is that my peers also gave me a few statements that encouraged me to continue work. I like the statements like ” The piece is so beautiful and speaks rejoice on relationship and life”. Another statement I felt was very kind hearted was when one of my peers said they enjoyed one of my poems. The poem she enjoyed was Obsessed she said ” Obsessed is my absolute favorite poem.” I think that was the main statement that inspired me to extend my poem. My peers are my motivators and I cherish all my readers and their feedback.

When I first started the peer editing I thought I would really get feedback that wouldn’t help me but instead I did get feedback. I think that no matter what I enjoyed alot of my thoughts because they help me get as far as I got. Another thing is that I liked the ideas I came up with in each poem.

Thinking through feedback is usually the part that’s hard besides writing your poems because I had use the ideas in ways I agreed on. This is because it’s hard for one to use others ideas when they don’t know how you were stating what you said when you said it. I think that when working hard on your work you can get extremely far.

I know everything that I learned this time I will use it next time because I take others feedback as serious as I would want them to take my words of encouragement and or improvements. Most people usually say alot of ideas that they’ll always use in others piece of work.

Writing Proposal

tashaiisawriter — Fri, 15 May 2009 20:04:49 +0000

The Chapbook

The “Chapbook” is a great idea for a final project because it’ll express the way I feel about the things I’ve noticed in life. When I chose to do poetry as my final project I mainly chose it because I knew it was something I would enjoy, and accomplish with a lot of effort.Through the ideas I came up with, I realized that there are many things that happen in people’s lives; that causes them to change. In my Chapbook it’ll have the idea of the sense of someone life and how they can go through changes. A few of my ideas is about how someone can struggle in many obstacles, and how they can change in just a matter of time. When writing a poem you can experience many feelings, and I know that when writing my poems I gain different feelings. This will make my thoughts flow in the order of the process that I would be able to write very interesting poems.

In this process I have written many different topics and themes where I would begin writing so that I could bring my poems into real life to my readers. I’ve been working very hard and diligently, and that’s the first key to a successive piece of work. Anytime someone expresses themselves in a piece of work I think of it as their feeling to what they feel and see.

As I continue to write my pieces of work I make the characteristics of my work stand out. One thing I like about my writing is that I have powerful words. But I also like how my emotions flow through certain poems that I gain off of another person when I see how they aren’t feeling good or when they are. Poetry is a great way to express one’s self that’s why I know that this piece of work especially will be very fascinating.

My Power Word

tashaiisawriter — Tue, 12 May 2009 20:24:02 +0000

Essential is the original way to describe me. Essential means something absolutely necessary; extremely important. I believe I am very important to everything that I have a beautiful name too. I am a talented person that is truly essential. I am one who’s a great addition to the world.

To be essential is to be important, and I am important because I am one who makes sure I do things in original ways. Everything from my mind & soul to my appearance is very essential. My growth of my soul starts from the day I was born.

Being essential only comes from the beauty and strength that I carry. I am a very unique person that know how important being important is. Well as far as life and the importance of how I protray myelf I completely describe myself the way I act and the way I carry myself. I am an important person that must have great abilities to stand alone an yet strong.

I come from a unique family that doesn’t take no or any negatively in my life that’s why no matter what I do I always remember and say that I am essential. I chose essential because I believe I am important and I am my own.

“If I could write a best-seller…”

tashaiisawriter — Tue, 21 Apr 2009 19:32:24 +0000

If I could write a best selling book it would have to be fiction because everything has to come from inside of me from what I see and feel. One thing about my book I would have to say would be that it will always keep the reader attracted. My book will talk about all kind of issues that gives the readers what they want to read. The book would be so fascinating it’ll have everything someone would want to read on a daily or even over and over again in one day. When I write my book it’ll have characters that’ll be so real that many would write me and like to see how or even what they are up to now. One of the realiest things about my book would be that the theme. The themes of my novel will be completely carried on throughout the story. In the fiction story I’ll began it’ll have things that continue into a series. I’ll enjoy every minute of my story because it’s going to be a story that I want to write and I would want to take my time on. I’ll even write my story at the pace I enjoy a lot.

My Fairy Tale….happy ending?”

tashaiisawriter — Fri, 17 Apr 2009 20:05:04 +0000

My writing experience has been completely different from the time I first started this class. I believe that my fairy tale has made a change in all the ways I’ve been writing. Another thing is that I’ve seemed to put alot of effort in what I’ve done thus far in this class.

My fairy tale has some real life details and they have things that’ll apply to some of life daily situations. One thing about my fairy tale is that I’ve taken many different prospectives of others in put them in a story with amazing details, and the amazing characters.

My fairy will be up very soon. Another thing is that it’s very interesting that I think you all can leave a comment on it. I would truly appericate you help me help make my writings better with comments. I will truly love to thank you all for my short stories.

My Fairy Tale

tashaiisawriter — Thu, 26 Mar 2009 18:43:27 +0000

Well my fairy tale is going well so far. I have been working very digently. My work is very interesting, and I am really going to make the best fairy tale ever. I am going to put the Fairy Tale online because it is very interesting, and I think you all will enjoy. Lastly my Fairy Tale is about a princess and the people in the village that changes from dull to evil. Later in the story they will the princess will turn the town into a good town that the sun will shine through.

“After two weeks my writing is….”

tashaiisawriter — Fri, 13 Mar 2009 20:26:37 +0000

After two weeks my writing has became more broader, and I have established a new and more comfortable side about the way I write. In the past 2 weeks I have written some extraordinary things that sometimes I would’ve never thought that I would’ve written. I have made many changes in my writting, and I am glad that I found the creative side of myself in the past two weeks because I have grew in many ways when writing.

Another thing is that I really that even before the time I began creatively writting I would’ve never written for a long time without stopping. I think that when I was writing and letting my thoughts flow onto my papers I have completely written all that I had been thinking down. Writting is fun and I wonder what there is to come.

Am I a writer

tashaiisawriter — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 20:31:42 +0000

Many may not consider themselves a written. But I can completely consider myself a beautiful writer. Usually when I write I use daily situations. I also believe that my creativity can become stronger because it’s rare that I may use some comparison, and alot of feelings. My writing is based off true, realistic, everyday situations. I usally make up stories but at other times I write about the goals would be out of my day. Some of my writing goals would be to become better at begin creative. The inspired writers I look at would be book writers and poetry writers.